And another one..

I actually quite like this one.

One thing I'm learning is that it is easy for me to obsess on the way the drums sound, just because it was the first instrument I learnt to play. It's takes a bigger force of will to put more time into melodies as it is the weaker, less practised side of my normal musical creativity (hence one melody that I only just realised is straight out of a rihanna song - doh!)